Ako Hiko Portry Slam
Hello Bloggers Today I entersd the portry slam i did not know much about it antill i got tolled about it. we had to do a pome about the sea did it because it sounded fun and I like writing and it is peceful
pomes are fun to write because there is lots of tipes of pomes like hiku and lots of athers there is a video of me down below
Kia ora Lewis. Awesome poem. I like the way you read it in a really clear voice with some expression too. Are you going to fill in the form to enter your poem?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lewis! How are you? I hope you are having a great day today! It's Eden from Paroa School Whenua here! My teacher, Miss Farr, told us to comment on five people that have blogs and comment on there poems. I think that this poem is very good, and it rhymes as well! I definatly think that this is one of the best poem yet! Maybe next time you could say goodbye at the end of your caption? Overall this is amazing! Good on you, bye, Eden.
ReplyDeleteHi Lewis, I really liked your poem because it was original that you thought of it. I think you could improve maybe showing your self. what made you think of doing a poe about the sea ? what else could you have done ?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Jesse and this is a good pice of work I really like this sea poem and I think maybe next time you should do something else like maybe a land poem or something but still this is a cool poem
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