Tuesday, 17 December 2019

summer learning Journey 2

          
                            one two three
                                                             
                           hey blogger I'm writing a poem for the summer learning journey.

One two three blast off me Lewis in the rocket ship flying up to the moon the rocket prrrrrrrr went the rocket. The rocket went  
up to space. In
 a few minutes you're a stars everywhere and dark... Oh no banana and the air click click
whet  the rocket ship as I went down boom crash I landed on the moon I jumped out oh no I forgot to put my space suit on. Back into the spaceship get my suit on and then I can jump out I feel like I'm flying. I'll put my flag down on the moon now I am the first man on the moon. 

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1 comment:

  1. Eliza - SLJ18 December 2019 at 15:31

    Talofa Lewis :)

    Thank you for doing week one, day two, activity two! I love your poem - it is really creative and unique and if you say it really fast, it kind of sounds like a rap! I’m sure Neil Armstrong did feel like he was flying when he was up there!

    If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you go? I personally would take up the opportunity but I would be super nervous.

    Have a fantastic day and thanks for posting,
    Eliza :)

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