Hi blogger
18th of November I did the summer learning journey you got a pic three superpowers I chose invisibility strength and teleport. I f you have any time could you please comment on it. blog you later
Thank you for posting about the three superpower you’d choose - I really enjoyed reading them. I love how all of your superpowers are about helping people when they are unsafe, this shows you are a kind and empathetic person. It’s also very cool how you’ve made a poster and added an image - it is more effective this way!
If I was to choose a superpower I would choose teleportation too, because then I could travel the world and not have to pay for flights!
Next time you use images from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the poster, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
Thanks for making a great post! Have a brilliant day, Eliza :)
My name is Toe'umu, and I go to Wesley Intermediate. I like how you've added in an image to make it more interesting! Maybe next time you could credit the photo, because it isn't yours. But other than that. Great job!
Hi lewis this is really good I like your photo
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Lewis :)
Thank you for posting about the three superpower you’d choose - I really enjoyed reading them. I love how all of your superpowers are about helping people when they are unsafe, this shows you are a kind and empathetic person. It’s also very cool how you’ve made a poster and added an image - it is more effective this way!
If I was to choose a superpower I would choose teleportation too, because then I could travel the world and not have to pay for flights!
Next time you use images from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the poster, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
Thanks for making a great post! Have a brilliant day,
Eliza :)
Hello Lewis,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Toe'umu, and I go to Wesley Intermediate. I like how you've added in an image to make it more interesting! Maybe next time you could credit the photo, because it isn't yours. But other than that. Great job!
Sincerely,
Toe'umu.